An Ode to Sand

Rimaal*, it has been six years since I have seen you.

And yet.

I remember to anticipate you. I remember

how you cover even paved streets, the feeling

of you in my sandals, under my heels, 

so insistent, so bothersome, so constant.

In the apartment, I find traces of you still,

carried by the wind from mountains that 

are far enough away to be mere pinpricks,

but not so far for you to travel 

to make your irksome presence known.

And yet.

Rimaal, you are encompassing. You are

rickshaws, small and quick through city streets,

kicking up clouds of you into our faces. You are 

Sharm el-Sheikh, Gamasa, al-Sokhna, Port Said,

where we go when we want to remember

 that we still have horizons, with you beneath our feet.

In the one-bedroom-one-living-room apartment 

that makes the motherland, you are her bowels,

her leftovers, her faraway gaze, her forgotten dunes,

her nile as it calls and weighs and pounds upon us.

Rimaal, you are so aggravating. You are

the years I have forgotten, the proud balcony

presiding over generations, the midnight dares 

over a deck of cards in crowded gardens.

Rimaal, you are home, you are awful,

you are terrible, you are beloved.

And yet. 

Rimaal, love, can I tell you a story?

 

*rimaal = Arabic word for sands

Comments ( 4 )

  1. chantal de los santos
    This is absolutely beautiful. I adore how there are so many different feelings expressed about rimmal and how it is a bittersweet love. You miss it so much you start to nitpick when in reality all you can do is love.
  2. Raiyan Mahek
    This is unbelievable. There is so much substance to this poem, I wasn't able to articulate my own emotions. All I did was read and was able to feel so much.
  3. Leonel Ramirez
    Basmala, before reading the very first line I knew exactly what I was about to immerse myself in. Everything was so intricate- I felt as if I could very well feel the sand under my feet. I found the sand to be a metaphor for things that seem so easy to access- but in time may take forever or seem inaccessible. It's a love story (an ode, of course) to something so simple, but obviously impactful in your life.
  4. Emely Rodriguez
    This was breathtaking. I love the personification of the sand, almost as if it was a person you are deeply close to in life. There is so much detail that brings a sense of familiarity to the piece and it's all grounded in everyday feelings/ objects. Well done.

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